僕が作り出した言葉 Reflection thing

I think I did a pretty good job this time around, in terms of overall structure. I didn't really make any grammar mistakes, per se - most of my corrections were more along the lines of helping me better say what I wanted to say. In other words, I didn't necessarily have anything that was wrong, but they were somewhat awkwardly phrased, or at least not phrased as well as they might have been. I'm totally okay with this kind of thing, though - coming up with more natural ways to say things is something that will come with further study of Japanese, I think, and so for the time being those awkward phrasings are acceptable.